~canticum

So...
life is busy; I am not really on DA.
however, I have to write a couple poems for a project, so I'm gonna post them on here. I appreciate any constructive critisism, and if I have time I may start trying to catch up with a few of the thousand deviations I've missed

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very awesome poem, and only 13 people as of right now have looked at it.

Okay, I'm back.
As you may have realized, I've been lurking for the last few weeks.
I'm not going to keep up with deviations, though. That just makes me feel bad about not reading things fast enough. So I'll just read what I feel like, and browse through the work of whoever I feel like reading at the moment.

So, expect nothing! I am now unpredictable
oh, and I've forgotten how to use most of the emoticons; forgive me if I mess up



YAAAAAAAAAAA I'M BACK ON DA!!!


oh, and I'm posting some stuff I wrote in the interval too.

I'm a nut (click) (click)
I'm a nut (click) (click)
I'm a nut (click) (click)
I'm crazy



Version 1
I'm a little acorn brown
Lying on the hard hard ground
Everybody steps on me
That is why I'm cracked you see
(Chorus) I'm a nut (click tongue & knock head twice) (2x)
I'm a nut (click), nut (click), nut, nut nut.

Called myself on the telephone
Just to see if I was home
With myself I made a date
Got to be ready by half past eight (Chorus)

Took myself to the movies grand
Just to hold my little old hand
Put my arm around my waist
Squeezed too hard and slapped my face(Chorus)

Version 2
I'm a little acorn brown
Laying on the cold, cold ground.
Everybody steps on me.
That's why I'm so cracked you see.
I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)
I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)
I'm a nut. I'm a nut. I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)

I called myself on the telephone,
Just to see if I was home.
I asked myself out on a date,
Picked me up at half past eight.
I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck) I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)
I'm a nut. I'm a nut. I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)

I took myself to the picture show,
Sat down in the very first row.
I wrapped my arms around my waist
And got so fresh I slapped my face.
I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck) I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)
I'm a nut. I'm a nut. I'm a nut. (klonck, klonck)

Version 3
I'm a little acorn brown lying on the cold cold ground
Everybody steps on me, that is why I'm cracked you see
I'm a nut (click click)(click tongue)
I'm a nut ( click click)
Amen (click click) Amen (click click)

I'm a little acorn brown lying on the cold cold ground
Nobody stops to pick me up
(hands to face looking shocked) I'm not pick up!! I'm a nut
I'm a nut (click click)
I'm a nut (click click
Amen(click click) Amen (click click)

Asked myself if I could go, around the corner to the picture show
Put my arms around my waist (cross arms over and around waist)
I got go fresh I slapped my face (slap face , turn head)
I'm a nut (click click )
I'm a nut (click click)
Amen(click click) Amen (click click)

I'm a little TNT and I'm as cute as I can be(hands up like swishing a can can skirt)
I can sing and I can dance and I wear ruffles on my...WHOOPS BOYS(pretend to throw skirt up)
Take another guess.... I wear ruffles on my DRESS(back to can-can)

I'm a little pile of tin, nobody know what shape I'm in
I've got four wheels and a running board
I'm a four door, I'm a FORD
HONK HONK RATTLE RATTLE RATTLE CRASH BEEP BEEP(beep nose)
HONK HONK RATTLE RATTLE RATTLE CRASH BEEP BEEP
HONK HONK RATTLE RATTLE RATTLE CRASH BEEP BEEP
HONK HONK


yeah...



sorry about that..


Meh. I miss DA. But I shouldn't be on here.. I'm procrastinating..
yes, DS, you can hit me tomorrow..
So no, not technically back yet..

Alright, you guys, I'm sorry. I know my presence on DeviantArt has slowly been fading; I don't make as many comments, I don't post much. I'm falling behind in deviations and messages.
I really wish I could spend more time on DA, but school is just too insane for me.
I asked my teachers about how much time they expected me to spend on homework; assuming they were correct, and that I get enough sleep, I have 15 minutes of free time per weekday, a little more on weekends. [original estimate was a negative hour of free time, but revisions were made]
Every minute I spend on DA is a minute spent not sleeping, or worse, not composing music, which is one of the things I like doing most.
And quite frankly, I haven't been doing much poetry that would make time on DA really worthwhile anyway. Writing poems helped me deal with the general stress and semi-depression of last year; For those of you who didn't know, I actually have another account on here for my really depressing/emo-ish poems. It's in the list of friends at the bottom; I'm not telling which. But for now, at least, I'm finding other ways of expressing myself.
Speaking of the list of friends, I've apparently done pretty well for myself in my nine or so months on DA. I'm watching 66 people, 50 of which watch me. I consider them to be either good poets or writers , good commenters, or a combination.
So, here they are. For those who actually bother to read my journal, go on, make new friends.

Offline friends:


Group 1:


Group 2


Group 3


Group 4




Newest:



Note: groups are in .. pretty much how well I felt I knew people. Mostly. sometimes not. Quite arbitrary for the most partr, actually Sorry if I missed someone.


So basically? I'm quitting DA, at least temporairly. I may or may not be back. Good luck to all of you!